My new renderings
Oh wow, well done!
Glad you worked it out with the uv mapping for the pipes!
Great renderings!
May I give you some feedback on those?
Yes, please, I’d like to hear from you
First of all, great work on the renderings, well done!
To make them even pop more, I suggest the following:
- since the product is already very dark, I would either try to have a brighter background or have a brighter light setup. (The last picture looks very nice, but the previous ones, I do have trouble recogniceing all the products and sometimes hard to see where the conture begins because the color almost fades into the background color)
- in JPG 09: there is a strange shadow, almost looks like a sunglasses’ silhoutte.
- JPG 10: I do not know what kind of material it should be (copper, brass?), but if you look it up on the internet I would say copper/brass shower heads don’t have such depths in the texture.
Also I cannot recognize the little square on the part in the opper left corner - I would add another rendering of the shower tap: it has a different structure, makes it more interesting and this part is actually the only thing which would be touched by a person the most.
- If you have more time, I would make a showercabine as well, and place it insinde, maybe with glass doors and black metal frame
Hope some of my suggestions were helpful and looking forward to reading your reply and seeing further renderings of yours!
Cheers!
These turned out super nice! I love the low key lighting and the textures on these renders are awesome. I do feel your low key lighting is a little on the dark end, especially in the highlights where you actually can see the product. You certainly can fix this in Keyshot, but at this point I honestly would just bring it into photoshop and bump the highlights are little to increase the lighting ratio of bright to dark a little bit.
Here is a little comparison of before and after a little photoshopping.
Before:
After
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After:
I could probably refined it more, but just some rough photoshopping.
Thanks for your advice, yes, as you said, the images above are rough renderings and need to be improved no matter with the lights and textures in Keyshot or Photoshop for the details, I will pay more attention to the details which make the renderings more photorealistic, and it is what I pursuit with, thanks again.
Thanks for your kind advice and your time for adjust the rough renderings, yes, I should pay more attention on the details to make every rendering much more perfect as I can, thanks again.